Rotoma
The water clear as glass .
Sky as blue as my chromebook.
The trees as green as as a $20 note.
The bright sun shining on the clear water.
My special place is like that
The children playing in the water.
The native birds chirping day and night.
The sound of the water lapping over the sand.
The sound of the fat from the pork ribs on the barbeque.
My special place is like that
The smell of the great big pine trees.
The smell of the curry on the dinner table.
The smell of the sawdust by the gum trees.
The smell of fish on the chopping board.
Rotoma is like that
By Tobias
Great writing! I really like how descriptive your writing is.
ReplyDeleteGood Descriptive writing! and its interesting to read
ReplyDeleteNice descriptive writing tobias! I like how you added lots of detail to your writing to draw in the reader.
ReplyDeleteGreat writing Tobias. We did this writing last year too:)
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