Thursday, 19 May 2016

Ode

Success criteria for writing a ode.

  • Choose an ordinary play object or thing.
  • Give your subject a praise or thanks.
  • Speak directly to the object.
  • Use descriptive vocabulary to bring object to life.
  • Use repeated lines.


Eyes.


My amazing eyes.
What you see,
Viewing the great view of Halong Bay,
Without you I am sightless,
Your glowing colours in the distance,
Reflecting my vision.


Crystal blue like a curving wave,
Holding your solid black pupil,
Turning veges into KFC,
Sandwiched between my eyelashes,
Forever free to wander.



MEDAL- I love my description.
MEDAL- I did good destruction.
MISSION- To write a longer poem next time.

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