Success criteria for writing a ode.
- Choose an ordinary play object or thing.
- Give your subject a praise or thanks.
- Speak directly to the object.
- Use descriptive vocabulary to bring object to life.
- Use repeated lines.
Eyes.
My amazing eyes.
What you see,
Viewing the great view of Halong Bay,
Without you I am sightless,
Your glowing colours in the distance,
Reflecting my vision.
Crystal blue like a curving wave,
Holding your solid black pupil,
Turning veges into KFC,
Sandwiched between my eyelashes,
Forever free to wander.MEDAL- I love my description.
MEDAL- I did good destruction.
MISSION- To write a longer poem next time.
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